Wednesday, November 16, 2011

something hidden

A strange circle of
momentum swells in
this fruitful
gray breath.
Overnight, a cathedral
gathers.
Something hidden
reaches me:
an arrow,
praising string.

--lks 2011
some rights reserved

This found poem was pulled forth from Rilke's Duino Elegies, the A. Poulin translation.

6 comments:

  1. "Overnight, a cathedral gathers." What an unexpected thought.

    I like the darkness of the photo and the raggedness of the fabric. It looks as if it's been home to a mouse.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Thank you. I added some blue tones to the image of the fabric. It's a picture of a scrap of burlap (I think) between the chinks of the beams of an abandoned wooden shack near where I grew up.

    ReplyDelete
  3. I recently realized that this found poem play I do is a kind of lectio divina. do you know that term?

    ReplyDelete

Search This Blog

Loading...

Followers

About Me

My Photo
Georgia, United States
I teach seventh graders writing and grammar and live in the north Georgia mountains just across a small stretch of forest from a pointy old mountain called Sharptop. I write, read, take pictures, meditate a little when I can, play around with creating ephemera from paper and other things, cook, hike, watch wildlife, and collect random bits of interesting oddness, both tangible and abstract. If you want, e-mail me at riverrun67@gmail.com or lksorrells@hotmail.com.